小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

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My farther is a worker of building houses.His work is very hard. He gets up very early. When I was awaken, he left home for workplace. My farther is very dutiful, too. He working hard despite the hot sunlight. He doesn' t at home until the night falls. When farther came, we started our dinner. Then farther went to watched TV while talking to us. This is my father' s day, it repeats over and over again, but he look happy and enjoy it very much.