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十一期间(National Holiday)，你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待，并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学，主要包括如下内容：
1．感谢同学的热情邀请；
2．对他及家人的热情款待表示感激；
3．表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象；
4．再次感谢他们一家人，并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式，而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出，内容并不复杂，可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Xiao Lu I was appreciate for your passionately invitation. You can not imagine that how happy i was staying in your home,to enjoy the beautiful scenery in your hometown.Thanks a lot. I was deeply impressive of the clear river and wonderful scenes in your hometown. To tell the trues,i really don't want to leave your hometown and your friendly and lovely family.Because you are so kind of me. Anyway,i was grateful of your sincerely treatment,thanks again.By the way,i will be more happy that if you are willing to come to my hometown.I promise you i will let you fall in love with my hometown.
