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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

发布时间:2013-07-31 17:52浏览次数:3224
要求:
学生上学通常有两种方式:乘公交车与骑自行车。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:
乘公交车:节省时间、节省体力
骑自行车:锻炼身体、灵活方便
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Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle
There are basically two ways to go to school.
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Taking bus or riding bicycle.However,which one do you prefer more?Maybe the answer for you are opposite.There are some reasons giving by me. Take bus for example,many of us like taking bus to school,because it can reduce our time our labors,which can let us have more time and more energy to study. In the contrast,some students are willing to ride to school.The main reason is that riding is good for our body.Besides,it is convenient for us. As for me,i prefer to ride rather than take bus.Because,through riding i can breathe fresh air and see the beautiful sights beside the road.What's more i could greet to everyone i see on the way.It is a good way to keep close relations with my neighbors.Besides,riding is benefit of my body.

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