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词数100~120,文章的题目和开头已给出(不计词数)。
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Taking bus or riding bicycle.However,which one do you prefer more?Maybe the answer for you are opposite.There are some reasons giving by me. Take bus for example,many of us like taking bus to school,because it can reduce our time our labors,which can let us have more time and more energy to study. In the contrast,some students are willing to ride to school.The main reason is that riding is good for our body.Besides,it is convenient for us. As for me,i prefer to ride rather than take bus.Because,through riding i can breathe fresh air and see the beautiful sights beside the road.What's more i could greet to everyone i see on the way.It is a good way to keep close relations with my neighbors.Besides,riding is benefit of my body.