2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

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In the picture, we can see there are many people stand in a web which likes a spider-web, and it is a computer before everybody. It reflects that the more close to the center, the narrower the space is. It means internet has already produced a great influence to people. The web keeps people in connection with each other, but the influence is not good for our life all the time. It looks like people become more close each other by web in the exterior, but that becomes more remote in the interior finally. First, at present we can scan every thing through web, it makes our life more convenient, but it also lets person become lazy. We can respect our friends or relaters through web everywhere and any time , need not move to their home any more, but just this reduce the relationship. People don't like to go out and to get together with their friends and relater, hold the idea that their can keep the sense just by the approach. But we must admit that a web can't delivery all idea and sense of a person. Second, as the influence of web increasing, many people spend too much time on surfing on line. Search tells us that a young person may spend three days on line a week, it becomes an excuse for they have no time to relate someone else. In my opinion, web broaden the distance between people, it brings convenience to society, and it causes some bad influences at the same time. However, web is not bad itself, the fault comes from person.