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Good friends I am a student at English speaking school with B and C. B likes playing basketball very much. He is a player of a basketball club.he often wears his uniform to shool,then he is pretty cool. And C is a singer,So, She is good at singing ,She gives us fun when shi sings. we all study English two days a week.