作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Good friends I am a student at English speaking school with my friends B and C. B is 19 years old and is from fuzhou.He likes playing basketball very much. He is a player of a basketball club.He often goes to shool with his uniform,then he is pretty cool. C is a singer,She lives in fuzhou too.So, She is good at singing ,She gives us fun when she sings.She also gives us new information about music. We all study English two days a week.Then we are happy!