七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode his bike to the park. He ha d a great fun playing in the park. In e afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents.th It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for his. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a great day！