高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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i like football sports very much.once i went home ,we found a football,then we played it together.we had a happy time .from then on ,i liked football very much.i always play it with my good friends.i like football team player such as a professional football player.my dream is to become a professional football player.