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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2871
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

The table describes data about accidents in a Chinese city in 2005.It shows that the fatal due to the car accident,which account in 15%,is driving after drinking.The driving in influence followed by pedestrians crossing roads carelessly,drivers turning left without due care,and drivers traveling too close to other vehicles.It comforting that while others increasing extremely compared with 2004,the cause which drivers failing to give a signal decreased slightly,about 5%. So,it is the drunk driving caused the most of the accident.But what can we do? The three methods may reduce the probability of driving after drinking. Firstly,the restaurant and bar should provide reference services,so that the guest can go home safety in someway.Secondly,the content of propaganda about harm of drunk driving should be increased by media.Last but not least,every one should have a high level of the consciousness that don't drunken driving. Only in these ways,can we reduce the dangerous and have a happier life.

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