2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(94):环保

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

As we all known,trees are the producer of oxygen.Without oxygen man can not live.What's matter is that rain forest is the biggest creator of oxygen in our earth.It has many benefits to us. Rain forest can produce oxygen to human,which can help them survival.In addition,it's also the important home of wild animals.However,the future of rain forest is worse.In order to get more fortune.More and more people cut down more rain forest to produce other product.As a return,the area of rain forest is reduce fast.To make matters worse,many of animals are ding out. To prove this problem,I think the government should make laws to protect rain forest from reducing.The most important thing is that students should take action right now.We only have one earth,a few of rain forests,we should pay more attention to protect it.