小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher My new teacher is Shophy,a chinese gerl, 26-year-old. She likes music. going to the ciname and hanging aut with friends. She terches us English spoken and write. One saturdays Her lessons start with a short happy time,She tells us about world events. we all love her.