文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
My new teacher My new teacher is Shophy,a chinese girl, 26-year-old. She likes music. swimming,going to the cinema and hanging aut with friends. She teaches us English spoken and write. One saturdays Her lessons start with happy time,She tells us about world events. She is an angel! we all love her.