字数:200满分:100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;文章层次较为清晰;能够使用一些不错的从句。
In the drawing, we can see a football player is going to shoot the football to the gate, and there is an other player needs do his best to hardly the football in the gate. It is interesting that the shooter think the gate is too small to get the ball in, and the guarder think the gate is too big to catch the football. The picture reflects different idea of the two players when they face the same difficulty. In my opinion, it tells us that when a person faces a difficulty, he or her often broaden the difficulty. It is a normal sense that we will lost confidence when we face problem or difficulty. It is because we can not forecast what will happen at next second and we do not know whether we can control it. This idea will lead us to enlarge the difficulty, and let ourselves fear. But how to overcome the sense? I think the answer in people's heart. I remember mother ever told me a sentence, if you fear the difficulty, it will beat you at least, no matter it is big or small. I agree the idea by my example. When I was ten years old, I been asked to read a part of a textbook. I felt very sad at that time and I felt hot in my face. At the capital time I remembered what my mother told, and I collect my encourage to read the textbook in a large voice. "No matter what happen, I must finish the work and I can not void it," I told myself in mind. At last, teacher gave me a commend, I overcome the difficulty by myself. To the problem, what I want to say just is that we should not fear problem and difficulty. If we look them as nothing, we can overcome difficulties one by one, and attain our goals.