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Hi George .Very gald to reieve your letter.In my homtown ,the household hotel is cheapest .The one people room 30 yuan and the cuople of 20yuan everyday.With housepeople go luach ,there are have card .If you not stifialy the accommodation ,you can yourself doing .There have sea bath and swwming and climb .It 's not have pay of wear labor. In the household hotel ,you can learn Chinese as well feel home atomsphere.Welcome to Chinese. Your friend Lihua