高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；可以适当增加副词的使用。

As a chinese national,i think it is necessary to improve the populace's cultivation,china is country which is developing,so we need to correct our behaviour to be better and better. In my daily life,many incivilizations behavior appear in public,by way of illustration,ues cellphone in hosipital,and throw rubbish in every where,furthermore someone who across pavement ignore traffic lights. This incivilizations are dangerous and impolite,we must correct this bad habit. I believe,if i do this things civilize and polite,courtry will be estanblished better and better So everybody fighting