字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
熟练的采用了一些从句;文中衔接词丰富;作者词汇表达较丰富,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
The picture given above told us that person's attitude to the same thing is very different. When some milk spill out of the bottle,one man said "it is horroble that I lost all I embarrassed"and the other man said"It is so luck that there is some milk left". Although,the theory we can conclude form the picture is simple but it is really meaningful for everyone of us.It told us men who are optmistic always be filled with courage and find benefit form frustrations.On the contrast,men who are pessimistic always feel that the world end is coming and the difficult is impossible to come over,when they facing the tragedy.The former person will try his best to defeat the difficulty and succeed eventally.The latter person will loss his confidence and dooms to default at the end. In my oppinon,there is a lot of frustrations in our lives,we must learn how to defeat them and maintain optimistic.Complainness is not helpful and optimistism is the only effective way to achieve the success.