托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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I disagree this statement about participate in sports is worthwhile only when you win something. For my point of view,if you participate a competition,you must affirm want to win this competition,because this is a human nature.but if you put aside this thought,you can discover participate can check out our physical quality and also this is a good way for me to exercise.And you can make many friends in some sports competition. Judging a competition have a worth whether or not,rest with you think worth perspective.