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Dear friend, I am glad to write to you.My name's Ling Li,my age is thirteen.My birthday is coming,February eighth.I'm very happy.Do you want to come to my birthday dinner?Do you like salad and apples for dinner? My birthday dinner has many salad and apples.Because I like them and i think they're very healthy food. Tomorrow is Monday.I'll go to the school,but I'am very happy,because tomorrow has P.E..I like P.E.,because I can play basketball with my classmates.I think play basketball is very fun and healthy.what's your favorite sports?Do you like basketball,too?