2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

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The terrible scene shown in the carton tell us that some people in our life still have no awareness of environment protectation.The carton illustrate that two men are chating and eating happily on aboat and casually throwing their rubbish into the lake which is full of litter and waste. The carton get us thinking too much due to far reaching influence.Though,consicous of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people,we still see some unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots.Many factors are accounting for this phenomenon.The first and premost is that many people may not think it is great deal to throw rubbish everywhere.In addition,the environment protection system is not satisfying.There is no regulation in some place or the complement is not actrual. In my opinon,it is urgent to take some effective and relative measure before the things goes too badly.The first place, it should be continue to propagana in communities and schools,in order to enhance conscious of protecting enviroment in people's mind.In the second,more effective and relative measure should be taken by government.People should work together to creat clean and beautiful surouding.