高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

My hometown In the past years,my hometown is very beautiful。There were many trees ,and river's water was clean because could see everthing about fish .water-grass and so on。Though house was very simple，we are happy。The street where is center of county is very narrow and small。 But now，there are many tall buildings and factories 。Big buses and a cars is full of road as well。The factories have many effluents and they are discharged to rivers without dealing。Pollution more and more serious。There are something that is clean rivers · thick woods and so on is disappear。 So let us act to protect environment。