高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。

My Hometown My hometown is Chongqing.It is a very beautiful city.As time gose by,there are some changes have happened in my homeland. In the past,there were many trees,air was as fresh as the countyside,people worked hard.Although it wasn't rich,but it was really confortable.Now,everything has changed a lot.There are few trees and the air is really bad.Cars are everywhere.You know,cars make CO2,it is bad for our environment.It make our earth get warmer and warmer.High buildings were built everywhere,it's more difficult to see the clouds than before. It is centainly that my hometown is developing.Our life is getting better and better.But coins have two sides.Something bad is happenning at the same time. It is neccesary to protect our hometown.