高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport My favorite sport is play soccer because is exciting very much。 I fall in love with football because one thing that I picked up a football on the way home 。Then I played with them.Since then I falled in love with soccer deeply。So I often play football with friends on the basketball court。 Afterwards I focus on football very much.My most like the football star is Beckham。Which to became a professional football player is my best wish。So I began train myself to improve my skill. Thank football that make me happy。