高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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Dear pen pal， I‘m very happy to know that you will come China with your parents and spend Mid-Autumn Day here。Now，let me introduce you to China Mid Autumn Festival。 Firstly，Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history，which is create by Chinese people。It is a big day on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year。Every Chinese people attach important to the traditional festival。 Secondly，all family people will eat food together when it is Mid Autumn Festival。We will eat a special kind of food whose name is moon-cakes and it is delicious very much。We also will watch moon to miss far people。 Finally，I welcome to China。I waiting for you。