高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

My Favotite Sport Football is my favorite sport.I kown about football by chance.One day,on my way home,I found a dirlty football.My friend Jim said“What about having fun with it？”So,it's my first time have played football.Then I fell in love with football. Can you imagine how fun it is to paly football？I really love it!I took part in football team in our school,so I can train with my friends.We won many prizes as well. My favoreite football star is David Beckham.He has a great love in palying football.I am a big fun for him!I wish that I can see him one day.He is handsome,too. I want to be a professional football player in the future.Maybe I can be another Beckham,who knows.But I will try my best to achive my dream.