2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(104):澳大利亚行

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

How are you?I have arrived at Beijing.Thank you guys for the day when I was in Australia.It is my first time to go to Australia,you were so warm!You went to the airport and took me to your home.Then,you told me not to be shy,I was a member of your family from now on.That was really sweet!I felt at home.Jenny took me to see the sights everywhere,my eyes were openned up.She was so pencient that she answered every questions I asked.And she told me a lot about Australia.Thank you Jenny！I really wish one day you can come to Beijing.I will be your guide！ Best wishes