题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;作者词汇量积累需要继续努力,尤其学术词汇还有很大提升空间,另外拼写检查还需加强。
There are some capable that we should prepare for the future,but what is the most important thing? There are two different opinions,some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to be cooperative,while the other people take the opposite view and say that learning to be competitive is the best preparation. For the front people, they think one person doesn't achieve success without other's help,because with the development of techonology and society,the devision of labor is more detail than before,and no one can complish a assignment lonely.For the later people, they believe science is the only power to improve the development of society,so if one person is not expert in his major, he could not serve to his county and realize his value of life. In my opinion, each of them are reasonable to some extent,but they are not comprehensive.Both of these two capablities are neccesary for one's success.Only being competitive,a person will meet trouble because he could not practise his idea whithout others'help.For example, a chemist found a new material which is very useful for some usage.but this material is not be widely used only because the chemist doesn't cooperate with others.On other side, if a man have no capable, he deem to failure. Being competentive is the base of success and being cooperative is also play important role in gain achievement.In a word, both of them are indispenable for success.