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April 20, 2004 Tuesday Fine First I finished my homework at home,and then I decided to go to the cinema.When I arrived at cinema,I found a foreigner and he standing on the side of road .And He looked like very anxious.So I went on to ask "What happened"? Both of us could’t understand what someone said。Finally I relyed on body language to know the meaning。The foreigner wanted to go to the People‘s park。So I called a taxi,and told the driver where he will go。Then I go to the cinema。I'm very happy to help a people。