高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Long time ago，my homeland was famous for its beauty，there were many green tree under the blue sky，there were many fresh fishes are playing each other in the water。But，the buildings were low and the street was narrow。Now，live is changing，more and more high and grand building have been built，and heavy traffic on the street。It is a good thing with bad.More and more pollution has been came up.Protecting nature is a pressing matter of the moment！