过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;能够简单运用一些从句;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;请注意分段。
People offen say: the eyes are the windows of our heart. That is saying, eyes are importance to us, so we must be try ourself best to protect our eyes. Firstly, we should keep eyes clean every moment. Secondly, we ought to use our eyes in right ways,don`t do that something what can hurt it. For example, reding book on the bed at evening and make it clearly with book . Finally, we can offen watch far place after using eyes,and so on.