3. 参考词汇:代沟―generation gap
作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
My parents always wants me to do best。But some things that I can't do are many. Especially the requirements are too high in the learn。I'm not up to their expectations。Sometimes,parents often compare me with neighborhood children。I‘m very upset。 They don't allow me to watch TV and surf the Internet。So I can't breathe 。My mother is very superstition and inflexible。So she say “You can't make friends with girls。I think I have a generation gap with parents and I can't communicate will with parents. I don't konw how to deal with it。Please you help me。