2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(114):Water Shortage

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What animals include persons can do without water?It is a really serious problem. Nowadays,water shortage problem is more and more serious.Because population is growing rapidly,industry and agriculture's development and environment is polluted.So what can we do to face such a difficult condition?We should take measures to it,try our best to slove water shortage problem.We should get full use of water resource,avoid water pollution and purify rainwater and ocean water. And I'm also should save water。