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5．可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者能较丰富地使用学术词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Our school built in 1990 and have 45 classes。Our school have 280 preeminent teachers and 3200 students。The teaching building can accommodate more than 60 classes。 More than 0.2 millions books in the library.Science and Technology Museum has many physical and chemical laboratory. there are also four sound labs. Then I intruduce myself.I am good at English and computer.I am fond of listenning music,swimming and skating.Sometimes,I will read book at the library.I think book is firend for me so I will communicate with them. Finally what do you like and how was your school life。Wait for your letter。
