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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(53): How to Get Along Well with Others

发布时间:2013-11-28 17:28浏览次数:291
要求:
鉴于现在很多独生子女不知道怎样与人打交道这一现象,请你写一篇题为 “How to Get Along Well with Others ” 的文章
要点:
1. 日常生活中我们不得不与人打交道
2. 要做一个诚实的人,要做到表里如一
3. 要谦虚,骄傲的人是得不到别人的尊重的,更不用说友谊了
4. 不能自私,要学会关心他人
注意:
1. 词数100左右
2. 可适当增加细节

3. 生词:谦虚的 humble自私的 selfish


In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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How to Get Along Well with Others? In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.But we should how to Get Along Well with Others.Now,let me tell you. Firstly,the most important is honest.And that is to say we should be the same outside and inside。Everyone that wants to make friends or get along well with others has to be honest。It is the criteria for life。 Next in importance,we should be humble。Old people said”Modesty helps one to make progress。“Proud people are not respected, not to mention the friendship。Modest persons is popular with everyone. In the end,we can‘t be selfish and should be selfless。In life,we should care for others and help each other。 If you do this,you can get along well with others。

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