3. 生词:谦虚的 humble自私的 selfish
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How to Get Along Well with Others? In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.But we should how to Get Along Well with Others.Now,let me tell you. Firstly,the most important is honest.And that is to say we should be the same outside and inside。Everyone that wants to make friends or get along well with others has to be honest。It is the criteria for life。 Next in importance,we should be humble。Old people said”Modesty helps one to make progress。“Proud people are not respected, not to mention the friendship。Modest persons is popular with everyone. In the end,we can‘t be selfish and should be selfless。In life,we should care for others and help each other。 If you do this,you can get along well with others。