高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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if you want to be a populai person among around,the first step is to be polite. i attach importance to improving the bahavior of people. we should think highly of it,which can affect our life.first,a strong country has good manner whenever it be .second .we should build up a hormany social ,but it repuires the behavior of people. however,some bad things happen in our life.some people throw rubbish into grass,it mankes the gras dirty, others spit everywhere,which make our environment get worse,on the other hand,some people speak rude words which not only influence others'mood but also ruin their future. so we should do something to stop it .we should care for our eniverment,we are suppsed to plant more trees and can't throw everywhere.then we should pay attention to what we say, in order to make a polite social.