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When we arrived classroom ni the morning，we saw that a window was broken。So classmates discussed everywhere。Be hardly worthy of belief is that they did't have basis but they think this thing was did by our class the most naughty Tom。I think this is unfair for Tom。We should be based on facts。 But I don't think Tom did that thing。Because though Tom is very naughty，but he only want to make us laugh and not to do such a thing。And he is friendly with us。In the daily，he also help us with try his best。So I don't think Tom did that thing.
