作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Tom made up rulers to make his daily life efficient and more regular.Next,his schedule as follows. Firstly In the morning,he demands that gets up at 6:00.After having breakfast,he goes to school at 6:15. Besides,In noon,he doesn't eat outside.On school,doesn't listen to music, In nights , doesn't watch TV . What's more,being backing home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening,and so on.