最近,网上展开一场关于“教科书是否要循环使用”的辩论。假如你是Li Hua,请你向报社写信谈谈你自己的一些想法。
要点如下:
1. 据说我国的教科书寿命一般是半年,而美国则是五年。这说明浪费严重;3. 参考词汇:lifespan 寿命thriftiness节约
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。
It is said that our textbook life is generally six months, however America is five years. This shows that the serious waste. I owned two hundred and twenty million students, each year will use three billion textbook. This requires the consumption of eleven million trees. If the textbooks for extending the life of the year, it will save a lot of trees. However, many students from poor families can not afford to buy textbooks. So I think we should recycle textbooks. This can save paper and so can not afford to buy the books people get the book.