七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up on 6 o′clock yesterday.Then he ride a bike to go to park,he has a good time in the park.At noon,he and his parents has lunch in McDonald′s.Sam and his classmates played basketball from 4p.m till 6p.m.After dinner,Sam and his father goes for a walk,his father has have a classic CD for Sam.Sam has a good time in the day.