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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times. The best way to encourage a depressed soul are our friends. It was three years ago when I just began to attend High School. For the first time I failed in an English exam that I thought I was best at. I felt very depressed. My best friend, Lily, tried to comfort me, offering her emotional support. She listened to me carefully and told me Edison succeeded in inventing the electric bulb after failing more than 300 times. Eventually, with her patient encouragement, I overcame depress and was determined to try hard again. In the next exam, I did it. Encouragement is the best means to help someone feel better. It can give the courage to fight difficulties and motivate someone to move on.
