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There is a course of lectures on 2:30 Thursday afternoon January 5th。We have the good fortune to invite Doctor Li to our school,subject of ourse of lectures is about China Spaceflight. Every things have difficult processes,so China Spaceflight does,we also have a difficult journey,but we successfully conquer them. China Spaceflight is developing quickly,Chinese are proud of our country,because our country has wonderful future. A few years ago there is a big event of China Spaceflight is that Yang Liwei became a first Chinese to enter space,he had achieved the for thousands of years dream of Chinese. The next goal of China Spaceflight is that someone can climb moon,and i believe the goal must be come true!