高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was changed a lot in the past few years.I used to live in a beautiful town The river was clean and there were many fish swimming in water ,people are friendly and kind .People worked hard all year round . however, now ,there are more houses and cars in my hometown. You can see tall buildings, department stores and factories everywhere. Cars and buses are running in broad streets. But with the development of industry, pollution is becoming more and more serious. A lot of trees are gone, and fish have disappeared because of the dirty water. in my opinion ,people should do their best to stop pollution and make the town more and more beautiful.