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Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city,Nanjing. Today,I'd like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capitals of ten dynasties. This is a very beautiful city with a long history.There are a lot of places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings.Nanjing is a good place to visit. I'm sure you will have a good time here. Thank you.
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