正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少;请注意分段。
Hello,my name is Lucy. Lucy is my first name.My last name is King.I am 13 years old.I am from the UK.I am speak English. I like sports very much,so I am very healthy.I like music,too.I think music is beauciful.I like see movies.It is soo cool.Do you like me?I want you