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Dear George: Thanks for writing me.I will ask your questions in your last e-mail.First at all,I am so happy to hear that you are planning to visit China this summer holiday.There are so many household hotel in my hometown.You should pay 30 yuan for a single room each day.If you are not coming alone.You can take a standard room.It just need each one pay 20 yuan each day.For eating,it's 20yuan one person a day. You can have lunch with your host family.There are menus,you can order for what you want and you can also cook by yourself. You can do a lot of outdoors sports here.For example,climbing mountains,swimming,taking a sea shower.You can also do some greenhouse work without pay. In this way,you can feel China face to face and you can feel how China family like. Best Wishes. Yours, Li Hua.