但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
Ladies and gentlemen Welcome to our city. I’d like to tell you something about our city.Nanjing is the capital of Jiangsu Provience with the population of about 5,000,000. It lies in the southeast of China.Nanjing has a history of more than 2,400 years.In history,about ten dinasties have built their capitals here. It has many places of interest, such as Xuanwu Lake,Jiming Temple,Stone City,and there are many modern factories and tall buildings.I’m sure you will have a good time here. Thank you.
人气:61发布:2016-04-08
人气:77发布:2013-11-27
人气:105发布:2014-02-12