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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(115):圣诞假期

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要求:
下面是Linda给Lois的信,请你以Lois的口气, 按照提示写一封120词左右的回信。
Dear Lois,
How is everything with you? I hope things are going well.
There is not much news here. I just go to work every morning and come home to my apartment every night. New York is full of people, but I don’t really know any of them. I don’t
like the city, but my job is quite interesting, and the pay is quite good.
What are your plans for the Christmas holiday? If you don’t have any plan, I hope you can visit New York. Come and share my apartment. It is quite large, and it is quite near the theatres, museums and stores.
Write soon, and say you can spend the holidays here.
Sincerely,
Linda
提示:回信应包括以下内容
1.Lois没有及时回信,解释其原因;   2.Linda喜欢她的工作,但不喜欢纽约,Lois谈看法; 
3.Lois建议Linda该怎么过圣诞假期; 4.Lois谢绝Linda的邀请,并解释其原因;    
5.Lois也同时发出邀请。
Dear Linda,
How are you getting along? I hope things are going well with you too.
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Please give my best regards to your parents.
    Yours,
     Lois
用户的作文(系统评分52.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

I want to apolognize for I didn't write back in time.I was really busy these days.You know,people always do more works before they will hava a long holiday. Okay,let us talk about what you have mentioned in your letter.I'm so happy to hear that you rally like your job.I think it is a good job,too.But why don't you like New York?It's an amazing city,you know.It is real that New York is a very busy and quick city,Things change so fast there.Are you fit that well,darling?Try to fit this busy city,then you will get better. I think you should go to another city spend your Christmas holiday.Don't always stay in New York,that will make you feel tired.I won't come to New York...Sorry!I will go to Hawaii with my family,would you like to join us?I really want to spend my holiday with you. Write me soon,please.

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