文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
I want to apolognize for I didn't write back in time.I was really busy these days.You know,people always do more works before they will hava a long holiday. Okay,let us talk about what you have mentioned in your letter.I'm so happy to hear that you rally like your job.I think it is a good job,too.But why don't you like New York?It's an amazing city,you know.It is real that New York is a very busy and quick city,Things change so fast there.Are you fit that well,darling?Try to fit this busy city,then you will get better. I think you should go to another city spend your Christmas holiday.Don't always stay in New York,that will make you feel tired.I won't come to New York...Sorry!I will go to Hawaii with my family,would you like to join us?I really want to spend my holiday with you. Write me soon,please.