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Dear Messi, I’m writing to tell you something about one of my classmates named Hope. He is a 17-year-old disabled boy who can not use his legs and he has to sit in a wheelchair in life. When sitting in the classroom, he looks just like any other student. He is always good at English, which makes him confident and proud. Since he is disabled, it’s not convenient for him to get around. Luckily, we are always there offering help to him whenever necessary. He is extremely fond of football so that he has got an itch to go to watch the World Cup football matches to be held in South Africa in 2010. I’m sure he needs much more help and can you join me in helping him realize his dream? Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Jiang Ning
