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I am very satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people. The local tour guide explained everything about the places we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons. But the food provided in the restaurant didn’t suit many of us well and quite a few of us had to buy extra food to be full. At last, we wanted to be taken to the shops where we could bargains.
