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Congratulations!You are admitted for further study in America.Coins have two sides,oversea has both advantages and disadvantages. The main good of studying oversea are as follows.First,you can learn more.In the second place,understanding a new culture and meeting different people can broaden our minds.But by no means the least,studying abroad will only build our character,but it can open up our eyes. On the other hand,overseas study will bring about more disadvantages.Two different cultures,new languages.It is really a big challenge.