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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(43):音乐爱好

发布时间:2013-11-19 17:42浏览次数:733
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假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》高中版回音壁的编辑Tom,你收到学生李华的来信。请你根据来信的内容写一封回信,帮他出出主意。

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Dear editor,
I’m a Senior Three student. I’m unhappy these days. Last Tuesday, I was doing my homework with my favorite MP3 on in Self-Study Class. Suddenly my head teacher took my MP3 away from behind and the next day he scolded me before the whole class. I reasoned with him, only to make things worse. Is there anything wrong enjoying music? What can I do?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
注意:
回信中应包括以下要点:(可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯)
1.你也是音乐爱好者
2.音乐的益处
3.音乐和学习关系的处理
4.老师的意图 
5. 和老师沟通 
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Most of us have one or several habits, like write English words while listening to English words so remember faster. When he heard the news, I was very surprised, junior middle school examination and hearing test, did not think of the college entrance examination to exam, English exam difficulty is reduced, we study opportunities for more, but I can't give up English listening practice, to learn English is not only to write, read, more or to listen to English listening, so in order to learn English better, remember the words and sentences. College entrance examination English listening test, I still can not give a good method to learn English, learn English hard. I hope you can pay attention to English listening to English, or have good results.

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